The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/10
From a park bench to a computer. Kurt and Ramone just keep evolving, and each visit is an enjoyable one to share.
11/12/10
Natural and believable conversation, well done. Watch your spelling - whether and not weather, too and not to. But, hey, they're old guys - they're allowed to get it wrong!
11/12/10
Interesting read. I love old guys and when you put 'em on the net it's even more fun. Thanks for writing.
11/16/10
I had trouble keeping up with some of it, but it reminded me of when my grandparents joined the IM world. Such fun!
This was a charming little story. I noticed you used weather for whether and to for too, but maybe we can blame it on cyber-speak :)