The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/10
I enjoyed reading this story. It is a good reminder that man can do nothing without God giving him the ideas, tools, and opportunity. Good job!
11/11/10
True thinking outside the box on this one. You did a great job of telling your story through dialogue.
I loved how you handled this weeks challenge. Original out of the box view of Cyber-space. God is the originator of all things. I love reading all entries in my group. I learn so much. Thank you for sharing.
11/12/10
It's interesting to think that the Net might have come about by divine inspiration. It certainly can be a great tool for good as well as for evil.
I felt that your dialogue wasn't as natural as it could be. A helpful technique is writing good conversation is to read it out loud and listen to how it sounds. May God bless you as you grow and develop in your writing
11/12/10
Very unique approach to the subject. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
Congratulations on placing 6th in level 2.