The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/10
This is very enjoyable! Good job.
11/11/10
I really enjoyed this story. My parents are Seniors who love "mailing" their friends. The ending brought a smile to my face.
11/11/10
I enjoyed the way cyber space brought three special people together. Shows the warmer side to a potentially cool technology.
What an enjoyable read. I love reading all the stories in my group and commenting on each one. I learn so much from each entry. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
11/12/10
Loved it. Well written. Pulls all the right heart strings. This is likely to be well received by your audience.
One tiny thing though: It seemed to be a tad predictable for me. I picked then ending within the first couple of paragraphs. Might be just me though.
11/12/10
I enjoyed your story very much. Having worked with senior adults, I would have done exactly what the librarian did only sooner. It felt real and was a warm take on something I find a bit impersonal. Thanks.
11/14/10
Well written and most enjoyable.
11/18/10
Congratulations on your second place win!
I loved your story. Touching and believable!