The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very enjoyable! Good job.
I really enjoyed this story. My parents are Seniors who love "mailing" their friends. The ending brought a smile to my face.
I enjoyed the way cyber space brought three special people together. Shows the warmer side to a potentially cool technology.
What an enjoyable read. I love reading all the stories in my group and commenting on each one. I learn so much from each entry. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
Loved it. Well written. Pulls all the right heart strings. This is likely to be well received by your audience.
One tiny thing though: It seemed to be a tad predictable for me. I picked then ending within the first couple of paragraphs. Might be just me though.
I enjoyed your story very much. Having worked with senior adults, I would have done exactly what the librarian did only sooner. It felt real and was a warm take on something I find a bit impersonal. Thanks.
Well written and most enjoyable.
Congratulations on your second place win!
I loved your story. Touching and believable!