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WHOA! beautifully written and very true. I agree totally with your take on gossip. Thank you for an inspiring story.
This is a powerful story. It totally boggles my mind that people would actually do something like that.

I did notice a few typos like weather should be whether but overall your story really packed a punch.
11/07/10
A very good example of how rumors and lies can invade our lives when we least expect it. Thanks for sharing.
11/09/10
The epilogue was very powerful!

This would be more easily read with spaces between each speakers' dialogue.

Thank you for sharing this story--it must have been a difficult time for you.
11/12/10
Indeed a powerful article -and you managed to make it quite subjective.
As it is always such an emotive situation, I was glad you wrote with that confident voice Colin.