The Official Writing Challenge
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What a story. Gossip is so very powerful and the old devil does everything he can to keep those fires burning, but God is more powerful. Thank you for a very inspiring story.
Wow this was a thrilling journey into a different culture. There were many times when my stomach was bubbling with fear for your characters. This was also a fresh take on the topic which I thought was difficult to do.
11/09/10
I really like the way your short sentences and paragraphs heighten the pacing of this tense story.