The Official Writing Challenge
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Gossip is all part of a game we play and some never learn how to turn it off. Gossip flows like water. Thanks for sharing.
I really enjoyed the format you used. It was very interesting to read and you gave outstanding examples.
Tiny red ink you used sweat instead of sweet:)
Other than that little error you presented an informational and quite entertaining piece. Great writing !!
11/07/10
I liked the voice of your article and found it easy to read. It was also interesting and gave good information. Good writing.
11/09/10
I really liked the structure of this essay.

Only one tiny nitpick: Be careful of the difference between alter/altar.

This is well thought out and well-written.
Congratulations for placing 7th in level 2!