The Official Writing Challenge
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11/04/10
LOL what a fun read. I wonder if this is based on a true story.
"Stop sinning at once. He will cleanse you." Priceless. Thanks for writing this.
This was truly an enjoyable read. How many times do people jump to the wrong conclusion. Hoof in mouth disease. LOL.
11/04/10
LOVED IT! There are too many klacks in the world aren't there? I could visualize her snooping and spying. Great job
This is a wonderfully fun story. I thoroughly enjoyed it all. Nice job.
11/05/10
This is really funny. I enjoyed it immensely.
11/07/10
Great story. Loved it and enjoyed reading it.
11/07/10
I laughed although I have encountered people like Klack even among
the "devout". Unfortunately, the damage a gossiper can do is alarming. Some people like doing God's
job,too. "Judge not, and ye shall not be judged..." A great reminder!
11/08/10
i loved the freshness of the article! It was very easy to read and kept my attention all the way through!
11/09/10
I really enjoyed your fresh and realistic voice.

My only comment would be that this sort of misconception is a fairly common set-up in fiction. You're an excellent writer--better than a (slightly) used plotline.

Your characters are both very well-written and this is one of my favorites that I've read this week.
11/10/10
Wonder if Katy's first opinion of Ms. Klack's church was formed before she visited there. We are ambassadors of those we represent. Great reminder.
Loved this story! I easily identified with each of the characters.

Funny from beginning to end!
11/11/10
Congratulations on your well-deserved HC.
Congratulations on your HC!
Congratulations on your highly commended story.
Very nice, Angie. Some great writing. Congrats on placement!