The Official Writing Challenge
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Matthew 7:7 is one of my favorite verses. I liked how you described the love between the two. Nicely done b
Some beautiful phrases, very good writing.

I couldn't decide if this was allegory or realistic fiction--it seemed at times to be both, which was a little bit confusing.

Your story is rich in atmosphere and love.
very nice story. That verse was the subject of my bible study yesterday so what a great story to supplement my study! Thank you!
I enjoyed this very much. Gods timing is always perfect. Never too early or too late, but right on time. Thanks for sharing.
Your settings in this story are beautifully described and you show the special relaltionship between the two characters so well.
Makes me want to "hide" love notes to my children :)