The Official Writing Challenge
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Matthew 7:7 is one of my favorite verses. I liked how you described the love between the two. Nicely done b
10/31/10
Some beautiful phrases, very good writing.

I couldn't decide if this was allegory or realistic fiction--it seemed at times to be both, which was a little bit confusing.

Your story is rich in atmosphere and love.
11/01/10
very nice story. That verse was the subject of my bible study yesterday so what a great story to supplement my study! Thank you!
I enjoyed this very much. Gods timing is always perfect. Never too early or too late, but right on time. Thanks for sharing.
11/04/10
Your settings in this story are beautifully described and you show the special relaltionship between the two characters so well.
Makes me want to "hide" love notes to my children :)