The Official Writing Challenge
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10/28/10
This was powerful! And very real. Good job!
This caught my interest from the very beginning and held it to the very end.
Excellent job.
10/28/10
A very thought-provoking story and one that will cause many of us to examine our own commitment to Jesus.
Very well done. God Bless.
Exciting letter! The title grabbed my attention. Well written and an excellent reminder of how difficult it can be to keep the faith.
Exciting letter! The title grabbed my attention. Well written and an excellent reminder of how difficult it can be to keep the faith.
Exciting letter! The title grabbed my attention. Well written and an excellent reminder of how difficult it can be to keep the faith.
Exciting letter! The title grabbed my attention. Well written and an excellent reminder of how difficult it can be to keep the faith.
10/29/10
This is a compelling story and sounded very real. The pace keeps the suspense moving forward to the wonderful ending. Thanks for sharing.
10/29/10
That was awesome! And scary! And probably true more often that we would like to think about.
This is a thrilling story that had my heart pounding at different times. You did an outstanding job from beginning to end.
10/31/10
Very well done--the reader doesn't know what the MC will write in the letter until the guard does--a masterful touch. This was superb.
Excellent letter. The title as well as the letter held my attention from beginning to end. How many would truly have that much faith? One never knows until they are faced with the choice. Thank you.
11/02/10
You nailed the topic and kept this reader on th edge of her seat. Surprise ending too. Great!
11/04/10
Congratulations on your 3rd Place, Teri. This is such a gripping story. Your writing really pulled us to the edge of our seats. Great job.
Congratulations for placing 3rd in your level!
11/08/10
Congratulations on a fine piece. The present tense brings and excitement and intimacy to the piece which would not have been there as strongly had it been past. You'll be moving on up pretty soon. This was a very strong week for the lower levels.