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The poem was beautifully written. I don't know if this is considered a letter but I enjoyed the read. Thank you for poetry about love and missing your significant other.
What a beautiful love poem. You easily pour out your heart on these pages and it is beautiful to read. I almost feel guilty that I am imposing on your precious love but then I am so grateful that you choose to share these touching words.
10/31/10
I found it quite sweet that a separation of only a week would inspire this love poem.

It was a little bit rough in meter, and some of your rhymes seemed forced--just some poetic skills that will improve with study and practice.

I hope you shared this with your loved one!
11/04/10
"And maybe one day it will become a keepsake
A monument that will always stand the test of time"
I think you can take this wish to the bank. What a treasure for the love of your life.
I'm a huge fan of your poetry. Another great one.