The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for sharing this story with us. We may question at times why things are as they are, but God has a place and purpose for each person. Good story!
This is a great story and the timing is perfect. With election day coming closer people are uptight about issues like immigration. I liked how you showed how words can really hurt. Your MC is a young man who The USA should be proud that he is a citizen. Nicely done.
10/22/10
Nice encouragement that God knows the plans He has for us. Though we don't always immediately see.
You had some gems of description.
What a beautiful story. I loved it from beginning to end. How quick we are to judge. Thank you for a beautiful story.
10/24/10
You tackled an important issue, and gave us an MC to care about. Well done.
10/28/10
Congratulations, Martha. So many life issues here, and you addressed them so well.
Congratulations on a great placing!!!
Martha, congratulations on your placement. Outstanding!