The Official Writing Challenge
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10/22/10
This shows high wordsmith ability. I am thinking the focus on conversation is there as much as it was in my submission but am now wondering if we emphasised it enough. You have been very subtle. Interesting to see what the judges think.
Flirty, fun read. I enjoyed this. Keep writing.
Truly a master piece. Very well written and I enjoyed the light hearted conversation between friends. Thank you.
This was a sweet story. I enjoyed it and smiled at the flirting going on. It was nice that you had a face to face conversation talking about body language. Nicely done.
10/24/10
Cute story!