The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/10
True poetry beautifully written. Good job!
Thank you for such a beautiful poem. A very enjoyable read.
Poetry is not usually my thing but you did it justice. You made your words sing.
10/24/10
Your love of words is very evident.

There were a few places where you got your thy/thine mixed up, and frankly, a few places where I felt a bit lost.

It's definitely a bit of abstract art in poetry, and I thank you for sharing it with us!