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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Conversation (face to face) (10/07/10)

TITLE: Song of Thy Song
By
10/18/10


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Serenade my sight with vibrations
in forlorn ears

Wrap my neck in salty wafts
of spoken peace

Let messengers carry thine
tones in lullabies as hands

Manifest your story by senses
not of earthen glee

Dare the parade of thy Lover
consider a rest with me

For my knees taste the piercing
boom of a warm day's Embrace

Cups of cake bloom
and deny not vocals
in babes

Yet, my chords to speak
bow at your feet

Doom formless hopes
before they are dreamed

Yes, procure me
in frothy truth

Invoke sensation in void
and
bid my plea to crimson provision

Whisper with fire and
Eden joys shall overtake

Distill the path of verbs
set in myriad ways

Seat this noun in profound
neglect to want

Storm with disaster o' paradox
to entreat me

Swing across syllables
and divulge dressy splendour

Make it ever a feat
to pronounce thy love

Lest ordinary gems
arrest me

Lest everyday giants
caress me

Banter thee this day
in swan tongues to writhe

Song of thy song,
let thee chorus begin anew, alive


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Nancy Sullivan 10/21/10
True poetry beautifully written. Good job!
Mildred Sheldon10/23/10
Thank you for such a beautiful poem. A very enjoyable read.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 10/23/10
Poetry is not usually my thing but you did it justice. You made your words sing.
Jan Ackerson 10/24/10
Your love of words is very evident.

There were a few places where you got your thy/thine mixed up, and frankly, a few places where I felt a bit lost.

It's definitely a bit of abstract art in poetry, and I thank you for sharing it with us!