The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like the verses at the end of this story, and how the story portrays what it means to be a true friend. Thank you for sharing this with us.
It always help when friends go that extra mile. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing.
10/22/10
Lovely story. Since Job's friends were too opinionated I will simply say, well done.
Oh I can relate to your MC. I've said before that Imtoo young to feel this old. How wonderful to have friends to gather and support her during a difficult time. Nicely written.
10/24/10
Very sweet!

I'd have liked a bit more characterization--maybe one or two less characters so that I could get to know them better?

I'm well aware of the devastating effects of depression, and you protrayed the condition very well.