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What a good reminder that we may not know what impact we had on a person until later in life, if ever. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
Thank you for pointing out about how we impact other people with our lives. We are God's ambassadors.
10/22/10
I LIKE IT!
This is a great story. I really enjoyed it from beginning to end. Bullying is something all parents need to talk to their kids about. Thanks for a great message.
10/24/10
You've tackled a very important and timely topic.

At time, Selena's words seemed a bit too clinical, almost as if she were quoting psych manuals rather than counseling a friend.

I love the details you put in to help us visualize these women--the coffee foam, etc. That's a great touch!
10/26/10
I enjoyed your article very much. It had a nice flow in the conversation and it was realistic to me.
Congratulations for placing 6th in your level!
10/28/10
Thank you so much to all who read and commented on my story. I appreciate all reactions.
10/30/10
Lovely story. I saw myself in Joe's father and it was not a comfortable read for me. I work hard and play video games. Great wake up call for me. Thanks for writing.