The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the conversation with Jesus. I walk around the house carrying on conversations with Him. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you.
This is a sweet story about a mother and her love for her children and for Jesus. Nice job.
10/24/10
I liked your use of present tense, which works very well in intimate settings like this one.

I'm not sure that our converations with God are literally 'face to face' as in the topic for this week--not this side of heaven, anyway.

Your MC's humble and yearning spirit is very apparent, and the story is moving.