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09/16/10
I like your story of Sunny and Rain. Good metaphors for the dispositions of both characters. Rain is a strong example of how we can make false assumptions, and then base our beliefs or behaviors on them, instead of truth. I like the ending when the truth changed Rain's life...another strong metaphor for how revealing The Truth of God's Love changes lives. Excellent.
09/18/10
God understands our anger and heartache. His timing is always perfect and reveals His patient and caring nature. God Bless and thanks for sharing this great story.
This is a nice story. Every living thing needs sun and rain. You did a good job showing your message.
09/18/10
What a difference Jesus makes! I enjoyed reading your story, though my heart was saddened by the events in the first paragraph. Good job and God bless you.
What a wonderful friend Sunny turned out to be. Isn't it amazing how quickly we can make assumptions without knowing all the facts. I'm glad that your MC learned the truth behind her name.
This is a very touching story. A reflection of how truth can change a life. Keep writing.