The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/10
I enjoyed this story and your applications. Good job and God bless you.
Good writing! And a excellent lesson in choosing friends.
I loved the story and how it showed that looking inside the boxes or people is wise. We put on so many faces it's a wonder we can see others at all. Thank you and God bless.
A clever interpretation of the prompt. Nicely done!
09/17/10
You've written a very entertaining story with a powerful message. An effective tool for readers of all ages. Good work!
This is a wonderful fairy tale. This would be an incredible picture book. I hope you pursue it.
09/18/10
What a neat story! I agree with the others - this would make a fabulous children's book.

You wrote it so well - a winner, for sure!
09/20/10
I loved this lesson! What a wonderful application to the poor Karis' challenge of finding real treasure.
10/10/10
Very well written, and a very good lessons throughout. Some boxes (friends) you have to open slowly some are keepers some not. Congratulations on your win.