The Official Writing Challenge
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09/21/05
I think I'd like to see the last bit of your story expanded to be a story on its own. Without going into too much "honeymoon" detail, you could make a very humorous piece about spending ones' wedding night in a dive. You are very good at writing humor.
09/21/05
Very fun, light hearted entry! Enjoyed it! I thought for sure there would be a fight though :)
09/21/05
Cute story! Ah, those wedding mishaps. What fun! You did a great job of transporting us to this wedding.
09/21/05
Enjoyed this light hearted account of a normally sressful time! I think a more obvious break between the two events makes an easier read but it was fun anyway!
09/21/05
Nice read. Ditto the above.
Great story! I noticed that your handcuffs were plasticc--much better for the air plane metal detectors, hehe!
09/22/05
This was very fun to read. It made me smile.
So cute! Light and contemporary style, easy read.
09/23/05
Fun! Is this true?
I think we all have a story about what went wrong at the wedding/on the honeymoon. Loved your light-hearted retelling. Keep writing!