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What a tender heart felt story. Thank God for Kleenex. This truly touched me and I enjoyed this very much. Thank you and God bless you.
09/03/10
Heartfelt story. I loved your last sentence...pigs fly in heaven...our ultimate healing.
This is such a sad story but you gave a plausible reason why Maria suffered the beating and you ended the story with hope.
03/18/11
Hi Johnna! I remember you telling me this story on one of our lunch dates. I could really feel your emotions and love for Maria in your written words. It's a beautiful story!