The Official Writing Challenge
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What a whimsical story. I would love a store like that. I love what she chose for herself. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
This is super clever. I enjoyed every word. You really had me connecting with the MC. When she picked up hate, I was almost screaming for her to put it down. This is one of my all time favorites.
09/07/10
Cool story. I'm glad HATE didn't get stuck to the bottom of her shoe!
09/08/10
This is a very imaginative story. If only fewer people visited that bad side of the store.
Very creative. I enjoyed your product descriptions. This was a fun read.
Congratulations Ivy! This is so rich and full of heart. Awesome Job!
Ivy, this is great! Now you get to move up another level. You go, girl!!!
Congrats Ivy!! This was great, see you in level 3!! I know it can be a tad overwheimg but you ARE ready for it.
09/10/10
This is clever, creative, funny and just all around awesome. Great job Ivy- you belong in advanced.
09/15/10
Worthy of the 1st Place title! This story draws in the reader to explore the dusty boxes along with the protagonist. Excellent writing.