The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/10
What a whimsical story. I would love a store like that. I love what she chose for herself. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
09/06/10
This is super clever. I enjoyed every word. You really had me connecting with the MC. When she picked up hate, I was almost screaming for her to put it down. This is one of my all time favorites.
09/07/10
Cool story. I'm glad HATE didn't get stuck to the bottom of her shoe!
09/08/10
This is a very imaginative story. If only fewer people visited that bad side of the store.
09/08/10
Very creative. I enjoyed your product descriptions. This was a fun read.
09/09/10
Congratulations Ivy! This is so rich and full of heart. Awesome Job!
09/09/10
Ivy, this is great! Now you get to move up another level. You go, girl!!!
09/09/10
Congrats Ivy!! This was great, see you in level 3!! I know it can be a tad overwheimg but you ARE ready for it.
09/10/10
This is clever, creative, funny and just all around awesome. Great job Ivy- you belong in advanced.
09/15/10
Worthy of the 1st Place title! This story draws in the reader to explore the dusty boxes along with the protagonist. Excellent writing.