The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/10
Oh how well I remember. I felt her pain, but the ending was absolutley out of the blue. I didn't see it coming and nearly fell out of my chair with laughter. Thank you for such and enjoyable story. Good job and God bless.
09/06/10
This is hilarious. You did an outstanding job describing the onslaught of emotions. At first I was going to suggest you break it into smaller paragraphs, but the pace matches her frenzied state.
09/07/10
Love, LOVE the ending!
09/08/10
Awesome ending. I loved this. You portrayed a ranting woman very well.
09/08/10
Oh my... this was so funny. Loved the title and the ending. Good job.