The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh how well I remember. I felt her pain, but the ending was absolutley out of the blue. I didn't see it coming and nearly fell out of my chair with laughter. Thank you for such and enjoyable story. Good job and God bless.
This is hilarious. You did an outstanding job describing the onslaught of emotions. At first I was going to suggest you break it into smaller paragraphs, but the pace matches her frenzied state.
09/07/10
Love, LOVE the ending!
09/08/10
Awesome ending. I loved this. You portrayed a ranting woman very well.
Oh my... this was so funny. Loved the title and the ending. Good job.