The Official Writing Challenge
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09/20/05
Nicely done. My only suggestion is to put spaces between your lines of dialog; that will make it easier to read. Well-written.
09/26/05
Melanie, there were a lot of entries that used the Gideon bible as their focus, but you really did a very good job with how you used it. It was a good twist - well done, and congratulations on your Highly Commended Award. Keep up the great work. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Congrats on your well-deserved Highly Commended Award. Loved the way you used the Gideon's Bible in this entry - extremely creative. Well done, J