The Official Writing Challenge
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This was so cute. Good old gray hairs. Oh how they vex so many people. Should I or shouldn't I. What will people think. Good job and God bless.
I didn't read your title first so I wasn't sure what the MC was annoyed about. The ending gave me a nice morning giggle.
Cute and entertaining. I enjoyed it!
I love the mystery in this excellently written story.
09/07/10
Mmmm, I could just smell that lovely coffee! Now you'll have me wanting to make some of my own ... ;)

I didn't see what was coming at all and you had me curious. Great surprise at the end! Good dialog between friends too.
09/07/10
Nice job building suspense & a very appropos title! :)
09/07/10
haha, nice ending! Everyone needs a girlfriend like Mona :-)
The title helped clue me in to what was going on, but the ending was still lots of fun. Good job!
09/08/10
Cute! I too wanted a cup of coffee after your description. Good job!
09/08/10
This is just perfect. Great dialogue, nice pacing, and a fun twist at the end. Well done!