The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this poem. We all have emotions, but are they guided by the world or the love for God? The last line in the last verse says it all. Well done and God bless.
This is a charming poem. A little red ink- you used there instead of they're. But your passion for the Lord and your desire to share His love is quite clear.
I was trying to think of an adjective to describe your poem. I came up with joy. Thanks.
09/07/10
Nice use of rhyme. I enjoyed this poem, as well as the clear message/challenge it professed.
09/07/10
Love it! Your message rings out loud and clear, like the shouting from the revival at the beginning we hear. ;)

I love how you wrote that we should not depend soley on our emotions but need also to think deeply about things in our heart. Great job!
09/08/10
This poem was very well written. To me it points out the difference between trying to "drum up" emotion for God and being rooted and grounded in the love of God.
Nicely written.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level.