The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for a very interesting story. I enjoyed this very much. Take care and God bless.
The flavor of this piece was pleasantly blended with the humor. Very realistic portrayal of the atmosphere and fun ending note. Well done!
Very entertaining version of the Bible story. Good job of staying in character throughout. excellent piece.
This is a thrilling tale indeed. You did an awesome job describing the emotions and the scene on the ship. I almost became seasick just reading it, :)
You sure painted your MC as a lovable rogue. I'm not sure why he got Paul's name wrong when they were aboard together for rather a long time. A fun piece with a good blend of action, atmosphere and characterisation. Good job!
This is my favorite story. You had me laughing all the way through. Every breath of air brought a new chuckle. Well done!
Delightful, imaginative and fun take on a familiar story. Good job.
Congrats, Daniel, on such a creative and entertaining tale - and your 2nd place!