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I enjoyed reading your story. Oh, the wiles of the heart. I was captivated by your story. I am a mush melon when it comes to Love. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
08/26/10
A captivating love story. You nailed it.
08/27/10
This made me laugh. I was expecting a smothering embrace between the two people, and then there's some mention of a dog! Not what I had forseen at all. Nice job.
I was a little confused with the back and forth but after I read it a couple of times it sunk into my tired brain. Love is definitely a breath-taking, beautiful event when the right two people meet each other.
09/02/10
This was love at first sentence! I adore the romance and liked the little twist about Giselle actually having noticed the dog first rather than his owner! Clever! ;)

Congrats on getting Highly Commended!!!