The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for this lovely poem. The breath of God truly is awesome. I enjoyed this very much. God bless.
I love this poem! The imagery is wonderful and very touching without being overdone. You did a great job of telling a story in such few words.
This is beautiful. It moves slowly and painfully which pulls me in and I feel the sadness of the MC. Beautifully done. I think some may think you missed the topic, but you definitely touched my heart. And that is what matters most.
What a word picture! I could feel the forest coming to life. The message was clear. Well done.
This tender poem ends with a promise of better days ahead. . . and it touched me.
Congratulations for placing in the top 7 of your level.