The Official Writing Challenge
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A very interesting story. I don't remember the Black Lagoon too well. That was quite a while ago. Thanks for sharing.
I find myself liking your story, though not sure I really get it. The more I think about it, the more I like it and the more I'm confused. :)
I wonder if there was a back story to this that I missed. But your words drew me in and I was anxious to get to the end and see if the creature had gotten to Nelson.