The Official Writing Challenge
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I truly loved such a tender story and I thank God for my box of Kleenex because I needed them. You have written an excellent story about the subject and it deserves to be read and commented on by many. Thank you and God bless.
08/26/10
I truly enjoyed this story! How many of us long to see good come out of past mistakes! I like the title, but if I had the option I would rename it "A Second Chance."
08/27/10
I really like this story. I was gripped from the very beginning. What a powerful message, especially about God's redemption. At the beginning of the story I slightly chuckled because I would always be checking on my son to make sure he was breathing. I suppose my creative mind always freaked me out a bit, thinking of everything that could go wrong. Well done!
You did an outstanding job on a very difficult topic. You have a great deal of courage to share this story. You drew me in and I was captivated by all of the characters.
09/01/10
I love the message of this story. Your MC was dimensional, and the beginning was just wonderful. Some of the dialogue felt slightly stilted in my head, but overall, extremely strong entry!
09/02/10
Congratulations on your recognition for a beautiful and touching story about redemption and second chances.