The Official Writing Challenge
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08/26/10
Very touching; it made me cry. Good writing is supposed to evoke emotion from the readers so I'd say you did a great job of that.
You wrote an emotional story and it was so tender. You did an excellent job and I thank you for such a tender loving story about breathe.
This is full of sorrow and pain yet hope is clearly present. You did a beautiful job.
08/29/10
Very heart wrenching. I cried as I read it. What a wonderful tribute to your son.