The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful story. I enjoyed this very much. You nailed this weeks challenge in such a wonderful story. Thank you and God bless.
You got me. I was a little confused as to why the wife would watch dust in the air when her husband could not breathe :o). Ah, but then I finished the story. Respiratory work on a baby calf! Loved it! Oh, by the way... glad you remembered to breathe again.
There probably aren't a lot of people that have been lucky enough to see the birth of a calf, but you did a great job describing a difficult delivery. Thankfully they aren't all this hard. Your vivid details took me right back to my childhood and the fun I had on the farm.