The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an exciting story. I sensed danger from the beginning and was drawn into the story.
Loved your title. From there I was engrossed with the story. Very enjoyable and well written. Good job and God bless.
Really liked your title. Also liked the part where her father prayed for her. Thanks.
08/24/10
I liked the title also. The topic was handled well here. Writing needs alot of work though. Practice helps keep up the good work.