The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an exciting story. I sensed danger from the beginning and was drawn into the story.
Loved your title. From there I was engrossed with the story. Very enjoyable and well written. Good job and God bless.
Really liked your title. Also liked the part where her father prayed for her. Thanks.
I liked the title also. The topic was handled well here. Writing needs alot of work though. Practice helps keep up the good work.