The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a charming story. I enjoyed the talk the rider had with his horse.

Make sure you start a new paragraph with each new speaker.

I could definitely sense your passion and a subtle touch of humor.
I loved this story. Keep writing and God bless.
Interesting take on the topic. You captured my curiosity. I had to go read the referenced scripture just so I could see why you referenced it. Good job.