The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/10
Too cute . . . had me fooled. I thought it would be a long-lost sister. I was thinking it wasn't original, but it surely was! Nice writing job, too!
Oh how our eyes deceive us. I loved the twin brother. Perfect story with a beautiful ending. Thanks for sharing and God bless.
This was a fun read and a great lesson. I was expecting the girl to be a family member, but you surprised me with the twin.
Hehe... the "it was my twin" card. I enjoyed your story. Keep writing.
08/26/10
Congratulations on your recognition. As a teenager, I dated a twin brother. The resemblence was not this strong, but did call for a few "double takes." Such a fun story. God Bless. Nancy