The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/10
Very good. We are to give the gospel to every creature and you did an excellent job of reminding us of that.
08/19/10
Great story! Good reminder to all of us to share the gospel with everyone.
08/20/10
Very nicely written and great reminder that we need to have courage when dealing with others.
AMEN! Beautifully written and how Alice handled the situation was perfect. Thank you and God bless.
This is a great story. I love how the MC was brave enough to ignore her boss' instructions and reach out to someone who clearly needed the truth not just some platitude.
This is a great story. I love how the MC was brave enough to ignore her boss' instructions and reach out to someone who clearly needed the truth not just some platitude.
I really enjoyed your story. Good lesson too. God Bless!
08/26/10
Congratulations, Jody, on winning 2nd. What a warmer place this would be if we would follow the example of making eye contact - with everyone! God Bless.