The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a good job on showing the different stages of the MC's life and faith.
08/08/10
A fine character study of Mary(Martha's sister?). Very well written and loved the tempo. Each line flowed to the next so smoothly. The reader can sense your caution here, as you write in a worshipful manner.

Thumbs up for sure! Thank you for such a nice read. :)
08/12/10
Congratulations on your first place. I truly felt I was looking through Mary's eyes throughout her story.
Best wishes for continued success as you move onward and upward! God Bless.
Gosh, what a complete surprise to see this!!! Honored and humbled. Thanks!
08/12/10
Congratulations, very well written.
08/12/10
Your writing has an element that draws the reader into what you share. Even knowing the story well, I was reading with great interest.
I look forward to more of your work.

Mona
Yay! Great story. Congratulations on your win. :)
08/13/10
Congratulations! I love to hear how my wonderful Lord touches the lives of others - it touches my heart Thank you.