The Official Writing Challenge
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This makes me reflect deeply on the life of Peter as he grew and got to Know Jesus and then go out into the world to make sure no one would forget that our Savior reigns.
08/08/10
Your short bio of Peter was informative and a good piece. I had forgotten all that Peter had experienced.

Overall, this is a choppy read but with some editing, it will smooth out. Is too wordy.

I bet you like to fish! Is that why you chose to write about Peter? Keep up the exercise and learn as you go. Blessings. :)