The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a fresh take of the topic. I liked how you sprinkled humor here and there.
08/08/10
Your short article on flying to a third world country was interesting. Probably not many of the readers here have had this experience.
(Maybe I'm wrong?)

As I read this, I got confused everytime I wrote down a critique. So, to put it in a betelnut shell, do some editing here. Your spelling is very good and grammar good. I would love to read your revised edition. Sounds like a good start. :)