The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the analogy. You made some good points and the title is a great play on words.
08/08/10
Good writing and thoughts on how we spend our time. I just got off my treadmill, so I am sweaty and stinky...but my thoughts were formulating next week's challenge article. LOL!

This is good fodder for a sermon on Sunday morning. Edit the structure of your article, as two "sentences" are not complete; certain areas are redundant.
Overall, a thumbs up. :)