The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/05
Very beautiful! I've never heard of the manager scene referred to as a Throne of Straw - I liked that...
09/19/05
Both beautiful and breathtaking. And your title is amazing.
09/20/05
Very lovely. Unrhymed poetry is difficult to pull off well, but yours has a wonderful rhythm to it, and a beautiful message.
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I too loved the title. The whole piece was well done. Thanks for sharing!
09/27/05
Ed, this was a lovely, simple poem. I also was blessed by the "throne of straw" description. It was perfect. You rated very well with the Level 2 judges and are definitely heading in the right direction. Be encouraged. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)