The Official Writing Challenge
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A wonderful love poem.
Some choice thoughts of love among two lovers. You have the beginning of a great love story here...but spend more time on getting there. Edit the many "fragrances" and let your verbs speak for themselves.

Excellent spelling and good grammar. Tip: a big help is to read aloud your piece. And listen. You have talent for writing, just have to rein it in sometimes. Keep writing. :)
Congratulations on your HC. What a beautiful poem!
Beautiful and worshipful. Loved it, congratulations.