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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Smell (the sense of smell) (07/29/10)

TITLE: The Fragrance Of Your Love
By wendell brown
07/30/10


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The fragrance of your love does always last
Along with the bliss that your love does bring
No matter how mad I can get at you
Still your love does make my heart sing…

And think about what we have been through
As the years in our lives pass by
Even though we have grown a little older
You are still the apple of my eye

The fragrance of your love still subdues me
Making all my senses inside to arise
For that satisfying smell of your love’s fragrance
Within my heart’s walls still daily lies

And God did make the special moments
That will each day always make us smile
For His Spirit was the binding adhesive
Making our love to daily be worthwhile

And It would never be quite the same
If we were ever to be far apart
For you are the peace that love does bring
Into my always yearning heart…

And still it does always seem to last…
The sweet fragrance that your love does bring,
And from within my heart words still come alive
As your love still brings my heart to sing.


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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 08/06/10
A wonderful love poem.
Jeanne E Webster 08/08/10
Some choice thoughts of love among two lovers. You have the beginning of a great love story here...but spend more time on getting there. Edit the many "fragrances" and let your verbs speak for themselves.

Excellent spelling and good grammar. Tip: a big help is to read aloud your piece. And listen. You have talent for writing, just have to rein it in sometimes. Keep writing. :)
Nancy Sullivan 08/12/10
Congratulations on your HC. What a beautiful poem!
Jody Day 08/12/10
Beautiful and worshipful. Loved it, congratulations.