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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Smell (the sense of smell) (07/29/10)

TITLE: Fragrance of Love!
By Cindy Tuttle
07/30/10


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The sweet aroma
of love surrounds me
as I lift my voice in prayer

The sweet perfume of
Your sacred presence
fills my heart with peace

I bathe in the
waters of rebirth
and listen as you say

Smell the roses
and breathe in my
scent of delight

Feel the essence
of my light
as it warms your soul

My fragrance of love
will calm the inner
storm and turmoil

Can you smell
My cologne of holiness
as I draw near?

Let it consume
you and take
you to your deepest self

Thatís right, follow
Me even deeper
Now we are resting in your soul

Feel the passion of
My scared light
warm your soul

Smell the bouquet
of eternal love
and sing with the angels

Now you are home
Now you are
with your creator

There is no greater love
No greater serenity
Your soul is at peace

Your heart gently
beats with mine
and the two beat as one

Rest a little while longer
then spread the fragrance
of love you have received to the world


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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 08/06/10
This is lovely.
Jeanne E Webster 08/08/10
A most calming, soothing piece...aah...I need that. Your poem took me back to Jesus' touching remark: "Come unto me all ye that are heavy laden, and I will give you rest..." Your goal was accomplished.

Well-written, good grammar & spelling except for one word, (scared--which should be sacred). Your use of verbs was critical here for the total effect. Good writing. :)
Jody Day 08/12/10
Congratulations. I loved 'the cologne of holiness'. A beautiful, comforting, restful piece; thanks.