The Official Writing Challenge
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This is lovely.
08/08/10
A most calming, soothing piece...aah...I need that. Your poem took me back to Jesus' touching remark: "Come unto me all ye that are heavy laden, and I will give you rest..." Your goal was accomplished.

Well-written, good grammar & spelling except for one word, (scared--which should be sacred). Your use of verbs was critical here for the total effect. Good writing. :)
08/12/10
Congratulations. I loved 'the cologne of holiness'. A beautiful, comforting, restful piece; thanks.