The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow this is so intense. You did an outstanding job describing the horrific way Jesus died. It's easy to put it in a neat little package, but you reminded me of the incredible pain and humility he endured for me. Again I say Wow!
08/03/10
You did a great job describing the experiences of Jesus. Some of the details really made me feel like I was there. But my favorite part was the first line in the third paragraph. What a natural way to incorporate scripture.
08/03/10
A needed reminder of true suffering. Your descriptions were riveting. I love the contrast of the reminder of the soon and coming King! Great job.
Congratulations for placing in the top 8of your level!