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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: See (07/22/10)

TITLE: A Most Treasured Time
By wendell brown
07/23/10


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As the sun goes down I anticipate
That special hour, that special time
When I will see your smiling face
As it arrives home so close to mine…

For its only your sweet smiling face
That allows me to share in its joy too
leaving a radiant glow that does come to life
Deep in my heart because of you

For so lonely were the moments of my day
When your face I could not see
With my heart begging for the sound of your tender voice
Wanting to embrace more than a lonely dream

I listen carefully to the outside sounds
As that special time of day draws near
Always longing for just the sight of you
Waiting for your smiling face to appear

For that’s when time greets me with a lovely reality
causing my heart to leap with such anxious joy
For you came home and kissed me with your smile
In a most treasured time that each day I enjoy.


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AnneRene' Capp 07/29/10
What tender adoration for that special loved one. You spoke for all of us!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 07/30/10
What a sweet and tender love poem. It made me feel all "aahh" inside.
Nancy Sullivan 07/30/10
I can imagine your loved one is just as eager to see your smile. Beautifully expressed! Good job.
Fern Brown07/30/10
It is so good to read sweet, tender words to a loved one. I sensed love all the way through.