The Official Writing Challenge
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I made myself read through your article even though I found myself cringing.

Your words vividly portrayed the reality of a hell devoid of hope and ugly.

I thought of some scenes in Lord of the Rings and your words were reminisce of that.
Your descriptive words and sentence structure carried the "ugly" weight of the scene.

There is an "aftertaste" that is very unpleasant and uncomfortable after reading.

So your words elicit strong emotions. So accomplishing that, you have written extremely well.
07/27/10
This dark story packs a powerful punch. You did not sugarcoat your words and the vile image of the devil fit his character. Definitely a fire and brimstone message here.
This is a very gripping story. It took great courage to write it. So many people prefer the stories with happy endings. I'm glad you listened to God and wrote what you did.
Congratulations for placing in the top 8 of your level.