The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so funny. You told it great. The pace of the story was perfect. The only editing comment I have is when you use Mom as a name make sure you capitalize it. I can't wait to find out if this story is based on the truth. Either way you did a fantastic job with pulling the reader into the story and keeping me hooked throughout.
A fun read although not on topic. Are you sure about the baking soda? I have used that for years to neutralize stings, sunburns, etc. Good writing.
07/25/10
lol, I'd like to know if this is based on a true story! Ah, the life of newly-weds :-D
07/26/10
This was a really fun read. I still have an image in my mind of her husband running up the stairs :-)

07/26/10
I hope that Eric is forgiving when all of this is over. I'm still chuckling over this.
07/26/10
Anne Rene', I laughed and laughed. Yes only a new bride would do this! Great job!
You told it very well! Blessings, Ruth Brown
07/27/10
This story was hilarious. I can't wait to find out what happens next. There is a part II, I hope?
Very funny. Well written. If they had a prize for funniest story each week, this would be the winner. I think the best part about it was the way mother and daughter could calmly discuss the most outrageous things just like they were chatting about the weather. Classic.
07/28/10
Oh, poor Eric. I felt sorry for him but found myself laughing at the same time. I have to admit, this is the funniest thing I've read this week. Sounds just like a newlywed thing.
Good writing. Fun read, however, I can't laugh at Eric's misfortune and outburst of hurting words toward his new wife. I have hopes for her, she'll learn to taste-test first before applying natural medication, eventually :) :) I'm sure this will place tho' in the highest rankings. Good cheers.