The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/10
Very positive message. A few punctuation suggestions include: a comma between "upward" & "searching" (1st paragraph), an apostrophe in "heart's well" (2nd par.), & a comma between "children" & "never" (3rd par.). Nice job. :)
07/28/10
Great message, I agree on punctuation, It needs some. Keep Writing.