The Official Writing Challenge
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As your last sentence states: The things which God has prepared for those who love Him, boggles my mind and yet fills me with excitement. I know that I can't even imagine the depth of peace and fulfillment that awaits his children. Awesome to think about!
This is a nice paced poem that brought a smile to my face. I loved the scripture you put at the end. How true that verse is.
07/17/10
We still imagine and wonder and marvel,Ahh he wants us to be as little children. Great little poem,awesome truth. Ruth
Great little poem and filled with such truth. I enjoyed this immensely. Good job and keep writing.
07/19/10
I love the beat of this article. You did a very nice job of playing the words. It had alot of truth and a little humor, and much of my attention. Good job.
A fun read with something to think about.
Very enjoyable presentation of your message.