The Official Writing Challenge
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This poem is so truthful. How true that many don't want to hear His words, but what beautiful words they are. You did a great job demonstrating this in your words.
You made a great point...the true nourishment that mankind needs, is for the soul. The bread of life...His word.
07/17/10
Lovely, the Bread of Life! Well done, Blessings, Ruth
Thank you for His Living Word. How many truly hear and obey His Word? Again thank you for reminding us about the greatest word to be found. Keep writing and God bless.
07/20/10
Completely awesome! It's sad how often God's own people refused to hear His voice. We would be wise to learn from their bad example how important it is to really listen to God. I like how you ended it with hope -- that some of the people in the crowd that day did choose to hear the Words of Life.

Beautifully written!
Excellent presentation of truth. Good job.
Congratulations in placing in the top 8 of your level.
07/23/10
YOur poem is perfect for the topic with a fitting title. You have a good message here!